Dialogue: Point 5

Occasionally, you will have a character speak, do some stuff, someone else does something, and then the same character speaks again before anyone else can say anything.

Example:

“There’s no place like home,” Dorothy said.  She closed her eyes, and a smile crept across her ruby lips.  The Good Witch smiled too.  Toto barked and wagged his tail.  Dorothy clicked her red slippers together.  “There’s no place like home.  No place like home.”

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