Dialogue sans tags

Tired of those annoying tags?  Want to wash them away?  Okay, but remember it has to be clear who is speaking.

Ordinary dialogue: “Die, Zombie, die,” she screamed and whipped out the machete.

Rewritten: She whipped out the machete and arched it through the air.  “Die, Zombie, die.”

Ordinary dialogue:

“Mmm,” she said, dunking the donut into her coffee.

“Are you still on a diet?” I asked.

“Does it look like I’m on a diet?”

Rewritten:

“Are you still on a diet?”  It was a stupid thing to say, but I asked it anyway, as I watched her dunk the donut into her coffee.

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